STORIES in the DANGER ZONE!!

Just phishing for compliments guys.

Who has read my Smooth Criminal Strory and what d'ya think?  Should I keep the story short or develop the characters, Michael and Anna further?

Tholstrup - I want your Smooth Criminal dancer, purleeease

I think you should develop the characters.  The story and the time period touches are very interesting.  I love the story, but you already know that.

I both like short stories and long ones, so whatever you do is fine with me...Just as long as they're naughty

See if you can find it if you google "michael jackson emoticons"...Mido also made a thread a while back on the Forum about MJ drawings or something...I think I found some of them there...Or maybe I can email them to you? Have a few...

Jenny Ann, love your story.  I hope you develop the characters, but please make sure to keep the sex hot and plenty!!!

Thanks for the comments.

I will  definitely continue with the story.  I'm keen to develop these characters now.  Smooth Criminal Mike is hot - and as Suzmary said in another comment, he doesn't waste any time.  I'll have fun thinking up more delicious sex scenes

Thanks Planet.  Definitely keen to continue.

Btw - if I reply to my own thread, can everyone see my reply?  Does it appear straight away?

Wel, lookit you go, Jenny Ann.  I see you all working up a storm at that typewriter.  Yay, does that mean your "other" story, or your poem, are getting updates, too?  Or is it one at a time, and I need to pick.  Ok, ok, I pick the "fastest" Mike, ok?

BTW, I love all the stories in the Danger Zone.  They are each delicious in excitingly different ways.  Love the California Dreaming BAd Michael, with their fun back and forth games (takin credit for that Twister tip, girl), and that Fateful Encounter (please forgive if I get it wrong) is just my lusty fantasy, phone sex with MIchael (pretending the girl is not who I DON'T want her to be), Smooth Criminal Mike is mysterious, sexy, and a fast mover, love that, and the "non" Mike story is just a lusty raunchy sexy bit of fun that I can't wait for an update to.

Ok, I think that covers it.  Please update soon, ladies.  I've reread them all already!

There are new updates to California Dreaming and Fateful Encounters.  Be sure to leave the authors feedback in this thread.

Great stories, great poems, love it all!!

Thanks for sharing your wonderful stories.  We all look forward to updates!

Suz, the Twister thing was already in my mind before I even began typing

Is SC updated?? yay...Will go read after dinner...

Jennie-
You story was really hot! I loved the descriptions of the charactes and the scene as a whole.  Of course, I loved the HOTNESS factor as well.  I was just very disappointed when it ended so soon! So, yeah- I would adore to read more- just keep it coming (and my dirty friends need to take their minds out of the gutter- I said COMING)

Janni- the twister thing was soo cool!  Loved how you described which body parts went where... I am dislexic so that part is always difficult for me to figure out (I need stand ins...ha,ha).

Also, I got all weak in the knees when she "paid him back" in that chair- you go, girl! And kitchens are obvioulsy not only for cooking. Even though there was some smoking action going on.

As for other stories: Rock that Boat- where is the UPDATE???? I'm dying here.

Fateful Encounters: Will you guys stop hating on poor Lisa already???  Looks like Michael got is covered.  The mindgames continue. And I hope the other games will as well.

Oh, ok, so my Twister suggestion was just reinforcement, or coincidence???  :)

Yeah, sorry, but I got no love for LMP.  IN fact, I hope in that story she gets that glass thing shoved... Oh, sorry... not a LMP fan.  But that story is mad sexy, just insert me instead in my mind!!!  Like who doesn't do that already anyway, right???

Smooth Criminal needs an update.  Seriously, Jenny Ann, I know you have a life and all, but we're hanging here!!  You drop a sexy horn dog Michael story, and then leave us horny ladies hanging!!!  Oh, the horrors!!!!!  Naw, I'm just playing with you.  Love the story, can't wait for more!!

The new story in FAn Fiction is cool, too.  Don't know who wrote it, but I like it, just again, want more of it!

That only leaves Rock the Boat, I think, which is MAD OVERDUE for an update!!!  Don't know who wrote that one, but they need a nudge!!!!  Please, it's a sexy story and we want more!!!!

Isn't gluttony a sin?  Ok, in honor of Ash Wednesday, I'll cut back on my begging.  I was gonna give up my vices for Lent, but I simply cannot go 40 days without Michael.  So I gave up french fries instead.   I just can't do it.  The Lord will understand.

Once again Suz, Amen!

Okay, Fateful Encounters, California Dreaming, and Rock the Boat will all have updates this weekend.  Meanwhile, there is some new material in the fan fiction section and two new pages in the Danger Zone:  the Neverland Dungeon and the Golden Gate.  Both will be *ahem* "growing" so check back often.

To all and sundry, the updates are super-duper sexy sultry Michael, and I loved them!  Well, Rock the Boat isn't Michael, and the update was last week, but it was still sexy.

I can't wait for more!  I guess that makes me a pig, huh?  Oh, well, I'm a Michael Pig, and proud of it!  You gotta problem with it, well INNYA FACE with my Golden Award!

Well Rock the Boat kinda talks about Michael, but he isn't doing the sexing.  Still pretty hot huh?  I REALLY enjoyed the updates to California Dreaming and Fateful Encounters.  I was laughing right along with Lisa when Debbie called, then I laughed AT her foolish ass when he rolled out from under her.  You're still not the missus anymore dear!  You f'ed that all up yourself!

I keep checking back for the update for Rock the Boat..I have obsessive checking for update disorder.

Hey, watch out- Lisa may not be the missus, but she is the one with the action...at least in the story.  

LOVED Janni's update too- SOOO hot.

Lot of shower sex going around seems like- our Michael was ONE CLEAN man!

I really enjoyed Michael's innocence in California Dreaming.  I bet he looked SO cute in his PJ's!  I would love to have a slumber party with him, cookies and milk, and pillow fights.  That is what happened, right?

I loved the last update to FE and I kinda dig that Lisa don't seem to give a doo doo about being nice about Debbie

By the way, when will Smooth Criminal be updated? If at all?